Re: [作文] argument No46 最後幾句意涵
※ 引述《frank11118 (帥哥)》之銘言：
: "Medical experts say that only one-quarter of Corpora's citizens meet the
: current standards for adequate physical fitness, even though twenty years
: ago, one-half of all of Corpora's citizens met the standards as then defined.
: But these experts are mistaken when they suggest that spending too much time
: using computers has caused a decline in fitness. Since overall fitness levels
: are highest in regions of Corpora where levels of computer ownership are also
城市中部分地區不代表全部
: highest, it is clear that using computers has not made citizens less
擁有電腦比率與使用電腦的時間沒有關連性
應該提出數據 而且可能各年齡層習慣不同
: physically fit. Instead, as shown by this year's unusually low expenditures
: on fitness-related products and services, the recent decline in the economy
: is most likely the cause, and fitness levels will improve when the economy
: does."
: 看不懂紅字的因果關係和意思
: 感謝各位神人開導開導小弟><
最後一段是說 最近的經濟衰退 才是近年來fitness-related products and services
支出低的原因
最後一句fitness levels will improve when the economy does.
為了不要重複動詞而使用代動詞 does 代替前面出現的improve
就是說經濟好了fitness levels will improve
這就是因果關係的錯誤
1.low expenditures on fitness-related products and services
不表示大家不重視fitness,可能為了省錢不上健身房 自己去公園運動
也可能將就著用家中舊的產品 不賣新的
2.及使相關產品銷售增加也不表示大家會減少打電腦的時間
還有增加花在fitness 的時間
3.或許經濟好了 大家會買更多電腦 變的更宅XD
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