Re: [語文] GWD-SC Set12-Q19 (同TN-9 某題)
這題是PP3 SC1 第255題 (25857-!-item-!-188;#058&001732)
答案E 前面有版友回答過了
小弟不才再補充一下
※ 引述《giyoshi (oh no 逆誤會了)》之銘言:
: 這題好像極具爭議...我看CD的討論有十頁之多...
: 而且~不是二選一在爭論,
: 很多答案都有人支持. 想聽聽大家想法...
: Q19:
: (全題都劃線)
: Heavy commitment by an executive to a course of action,
: especially if it has worked well in the past, makes it likely
: to miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when
: they do appear.
: 1. Heavy commitment by an executive to a course of action,
: especially if it has worked well in the past, makes it likely
: to miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when
: they do appear.
第一
it指代不清 因為it不得指代an executive
如果回頭指代heavy commitment 語意邏輯也不通
Heavy commitment makes it likely to miss signs...
commitment不會miss東西
第二
插入語 , especially if it has worked well in the past,
這邊有很大的問題
因為他是在action(n.)的同位語或是修飾語的位置上
用if條件子句(副詞子句)來修飾他並不適當
: 2. An executive who is heavily committed to a course of action,
: especially one that worked well in the past, makes missing signs
: of incipient trouble or misinterpreting ones likely when they do appear.
第一 句意改變 主要的焦點從commitment變成 an executive
第二 修飾語likely調位 這種寫法很奇怪
第三 makes missing signs 不對
第四 one that worked well 表達的是「過去曾經對」
但是在這句當中
現在完成式的 one that has worked well (迄今都對) 會比過去簡單式表達貼切
第五 well沒有redundant的問題 因為每個選項都有
: 3. An executive who is heavily committed to a course of action
: is likely to miss or misinterpret signs of incipient trouble when
: they do appear, especially if it has worked well in the past.
第一 同樣句意改變
第二 especially if it has worked...這句有兩個問題
(1) 跳躍修飾action 隔了太遠
(2) 同答案A裡面提到的 就算有修飾到action 也不該是if子句
: 4. Executives’ being heavily committed to a course of action,
: especially if it has worked well in the past, makes them likely
: to miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpreting them when
: they do appear.
第一 them沒有東西可以指代 executives所有格化了
第二 sb.'s being Vpp是不佳的寫法
第三 同樣if子句作修飾語的問題
第四 to V and Ving平行
: 5. Being heavily committed to a course of action, especially one
: that has worked well in the past, is likely to make an executive
: miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they
: do appear.
Being開頭 可能會一開始就被刪掉了吧XD
講正確的理由
第一
這邊是動名詞(Ving)片語作名詞使用
整個Being heavily committed to a course of action 視為一個「名詞」
這個「名詞」使得整個句子變成
Something makes an executive miss signs...
第二
這邊是one that has worked well in the past作 a course of action的修飾語
沒有if子句作修飾語的問題
而且緊接在action後面作修飾也是符合避免跳躍修飾的原則
: 我是選A啦~但是....我其實也不知道他錯在哪....
這題算是很難的題目了...
這邊分享一點小心得
看到長句裡面一定要注意修飾語/同位語的寫法
特別是 N, ~~~, V 這種的寫法
通常這邊都會有考點
這題如果有知道這件事
就可以比對出來one跟if的差別 知道不該用if 就可以先刪ACD
然後B的修飾語時態沒有比E好 make missing跟likely也都不對
就選E了
現在的考題都偏向修飾語跟邏輯句意
長句用這種方式解題 雖然可能會花一點時間 但是正確率會提高
刪being這種技巧除非是真的太明顯的錯
不然還是少用比較好
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