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主題是熱忠的事物
我寫的是movie
In my free time ,I 'd like to go to the movies with my friends. Movies can
cure my soul and make me happier. If I was in a bad mood , I would like to
see an exciting movie to relax. If I was happy , I would go to a comedy to
keep my mood . I think everybody need to relax after a busy day, find the way
we relax is a very important things in our life.
The most inspiring movie I saw was "the papillion" .It described the child's
innocence to look for the butterflies . In their way , we saw many
inspiration , such as mother's love ,caring and the warm. It also is a
ecological movie .
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