On Dec 11, 2006, at 4:56 PM, Miles Raymond wrote:
> On http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book-
> preface.html
>
> in the first paragraph:
>
> "...and the ability to take on board new concepts as they are
> introduced."
>
> should probably say "broad" instead of "board".
It's at least possible they meant "...take onboard..."; I'm not sure
the notion of "taking on broad concepts" matches the reassuring tone
of the intro. :-) The sentence also has a comma splice, something
like the following might be more clear:
"Working through this section requires little more than the desire to
explore and the ability to learn new concepts as they are introduced."
--
-Chuck
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