[Ask ] [ask]please help me grammer

看板EngTalk作者 (活到老打到老)時間10年前 (2013/10/14 16:52), 編輯推噓3(3推 0噓 21→)
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Hi everybody, please help me check the grammer of following sentence, thank you. 1.According to the Tobacco Hazards Prevention Act, both indoor and outdoor areas are designated as no smoking area. 2.Anyone who smokes in this area will be fined NT $ 2000 to NT$ 10000. 3.Thank you for supporting the smoke-free Maple Snow Garden. -- posted from android bbs reader on my samsung GT-I9300 https://market.android.com/details?id=com.bbs.reader -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 220.138.96.215
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1. both the indoors and outdoors are designated as
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smoke free areas. (sounds better than no smoking)
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2. will be fined FROM 2000 NTD to.....etc etc
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(i dont think you use the $ if it's not 'dollar')
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3. good. (for 1.use either non-smoking or smoke-free.
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2. anyone smoking in these areas are subject to a
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fine up to NT$10000
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10/15 19:59, , 8F
Sry. I meant "is subject to".
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Thanks everyone. It's helpful.
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10/15 22:16, , 10F
Re 1, do you just mean that smoking is prohibited in
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'all' areas?
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10/15 22:21, , 12F
Re 2, Anyone who smokes in "these" areas will be fined
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a minimum of NTD2000, up to....(NT$2000 is ok since
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10/15 22:23, , 14F
$ does mean 'dollar'.
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Re 3, Thank you for supporting a smoke-free
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environment in the Maple Snow Garden.
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and btw, it's 'grammar' :)
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Yes, all area. But most smoke people think outside can
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So we emphasize outside is also non-smoking
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Ha ha, my poor english
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It's ok, we're all here to learn and improve.
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2. Violators will be fined...
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agree with Sma1lami, 3. Thank you for supporting our
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smoke-free environment.
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