Re: [Ask ] Help check the three sentances.
I think it is better this way
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To my parents,
Your supports make all the hardwork worthwhile.
You are who make this dissertation happens so
I would like to dedicate it to my parents and siblings.
"
※ 引述《cementite (colony)》之銘言：
: Hello everyone,
: I finally graduate and get my degree.
: I want to write three sentences to my parents.
: As followed,
: "To my parents,
: who supporting and making it all worthwhile.
: You are the ones that make this dissertation happen.
: Dedicate to my father, mother, brother and sister."
: Are the sentences properly and correct?
: Thank you so much.
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