Re: [Ask ] I need some help on the sentence
※ 引述《waterfire (嘿嘿)》之銘言：
: Dear. all
: I want to rewrite this paragraph :
: " The radio frequency (RF) and wireless market has suddenly expanded to
: unimaginable dimensions. Devices such as pagers, cellular and cordless
: phones, cable modems, and RF identification (RFID) tags are rapidly
: penetrating all aspects of our lives, evolving from luxury items to
: indispensable tools."
To. djviva
Thanks for your adivce.
I try to reconstruct it again.
" The radio frequency (RF) and wireless industry has recently witnessed
an explosion in production and value, as devices such as cell phones,
cable modems, and RF identification (RFID) tags have evolved into
essential tools, penetrating all aspects of our lives."
I think it is not as impressive as the sentence "unimaginable dimensions".
If there are grammar errors, please correct that.
I really appreciate someone's suggestion.
Thank you.
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