Re: [Ask ] Inspiration Emergency
Funnel start? It's an interesting choice, when a dramatic event happened
only the other week.
You could also write about something unexpected; i.e. don't mention the
event in China at all
instead write about the long term effets of some distant earthquake in taiwan
instead of just the short term effects.
※ 引述《lavaever (達西太太)》之銘言：
: Dear friends on EngTalk,
: Oh....I need inspiration really bad.
: There's an essay on natural disaster which should be turned in this Wednesday
: morning.
: I want to write about earthquakes in Taiwan.
: But that is jsut a vague idea. I must have a specific thesis statement.
: Somebody help me develope it, please> <
: There should be five paragraphs: introduction, 3 developmental paragraphs
: and conclusion.
: for the introduction part, I think I'll have a funnel start, talking about
: all natural disasters then focus on earthquakes in Taiwan.
: as to the conclusion, I want to remind people that
: we can't avoid earthquakes but we can decrease the casualty.
: and there are still 3 paragraphs left. What am I going to do???
: Come to me, inspiration!
: O Muse, sing for me the ideas for this essay.
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