Re: [Ask ] My introduction of 2 year interview

看板EngTalk作者 (眼光只放在喜歡的人身上)時間17年前 (2007/06/14 22:39), 編輯推噓3(300)
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※ 引述《afl5b (鳳梨)》之銘言: : Hello everyone : Please check my grammer and fluently. fluency? you want to say this word? : I wrote it by myself, but I don't know is it good or not! it is : Thank you all : ========== My introduction are as follow. ========== : Hi there, I'm Kevin, I'm very happy to introduce myself and attend this : interview. : My home is located in Taoyuan and there are 4 people in my family including : my father mother younger sister and I. I was graduated from Lan Yang : Institute of Technology majoring in English! My hobby is collecting the : products of Coca Cola and model cars. Now, I'm a barista in McCafe. I've : working there for about a year. So I can make a cup of good smell coffee! I've worked : Thank you for your attention. : ========== That's all =========== : By the way, when I finish my conversation, can I speak " That's all" : If can't, what should I say? : Thank you all. I think Thank you for your attention is enough :p -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 221.169.3.191

06/14 22:41, , 1F
"I was graduated" should be "I graduated"
06/14 22:41, 1F

06/14 22:53, , 2F
"if it is", "and me", "good-smelling" (or change wording)
06/14 22:53, 2F

06/14 23:22, , 3F
Thanks. I know how to deal with it!
06/14 23:22, 3F
文章代碼(AID): #16SLCdDo (EngTalk)
文章代碼(AID): #16SLCdDo (EngTalk)