[請益] 短篇作文修改

看板Eng-Class作者 (h23474g)時間6年前 (2019/11/03 20:53), 編輯推噓0(004)
留言4則, 1人參與, 6年前最新討論串1/1
I remember the first time I read The Diamond Sutra, I felt like a tongue twister, and the scriptures look alike. After that I read The Diamond Sutra three times a week, I feel that the scriptures seems to be substituted into the formula, for example: “the Buddha said a, but not a, a name of a. ” After a while, my master asked me to read The Diamond Sutra seven times a day. At that time, my views on The Diamond Sutra are different! But it took a long time to understand the meaning of the four hexagrams in The Diamond Sutra “All the mind’s arbitrary conceptions of matter, phenomena, and of all conditioning factors and all conceptions and ideas relating thereto are like a dream, a phantasm, a bubble, a shadow, evanescent dew, a flash of lightening.” We live in this world and feel happy and painful because we think all the things as real. If we look at the world with the wisdom of The Diamond Sutra, we will find it is just a dream. If we use modern technology as a metaphor, seems we are in a virtual reality world. All the things we see in VR is not true. If we know that it is fake, when someone in the VR yells at us, we don’t feel angry. It is The Diamond Sutra’s wisdom which teach us to stay in this world with a different view. It is the experience I apply the essence of The Diamond Sutra into my life. 這是上課要用的短篇作文,想麻煩各位不吝指教 感恩~~~~~! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 114.25.119.147 (臺灣) ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1572785629.A.F5F.html

11/03 21:57, 6年前 , 1F

11/03 22:02, 6年前 , 2F
"felt"(時態是...) vs "look"(時態是...?)
11/03 22:02, 2F

11/04 00:19, 6年前 , 3F
是表達「過去」特定時刻的情況時/你那當時的想法/...等,
11/04 00:19, 3F

11/04 00:19, 6年前 , 4F
你該用什麼時態? 你寫完後有沒有自己檢查個幾遍?
11/04 00:19, 4F
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