[請益] 請問英文自我介紹

看板Eng-Class作者 (istee)時間6年前 (2019/08/14 13:43), 6年前編輯推噓3(3019)
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各位版大好: 由於小妹最近剛碩士畢業,需要找工作,想找有關科技業外商的工作,因此需要英文自傳,但不確定自己寫的好不好,已經有利用google, netspeak等網頁查看有無錯誤的部分,希望各位大大能給些意見,謝謝大家。 My name is I-Ju Wang, and I was born in 1993. I graduated from Chiao Tung University where I majored in Material Science in master degree. There are four members of my family. My father is a store owner, so I need to interact with people when I was young. It lets me become a social person. My mother is an accountant in the travel agency and is also my role model. I learned from her that if I worked hard, I won't regret anything. And I have a younger brother, we can give each other advice when we're going through hard times. In college, I took part in many public benefit activities; For example, I joined beach cleaning and mountain cleaning activities. It not only keeps our environment clean but also makes me feel good. To cultivate a sense of responsibility, I volunteered to be a class leader and a badminton vice captain. With these experiences, I became more energetic and was able to work under pressure. After I graduated from college, I worked at the National Synchrotron Radiation Research Center for one year. During this time, I can conduct beamline experiments, design experiments and solve problems by myself. These experiences sparked my interest in doing research, so I decided to study for a master's degree to improve my research ability. During my Masters, my topic was "Tuning residual stress in highly (111)-oriented nanotwinned Cu". I learned a lot of skills such as electroplating, electropolishing, annealing, and carrying out high vacuum systems and vacuum cavity cleaning. At first none of my experiments working, I was under a lot of pressure. I tried to find the resolution of my experiment and worked around the clock. Fortunately, I found the method of solving the problems and was able to finish my thesis. Trouble shooting gave me a sense of achievement and made me want to work in the tech industry. In addition, I possess some experiences related to semiconductors. I participated in the semiconductor equipment course and realized how to operate the semiconductor equipment. I also experienced in electroplating wafers in a technology corporation. These experiences let me have the basic knowledge of semiconductors. In order to enhance myself, I got many kinds of certificates like TQC-EXCEL 2010, C-level coach of badminton, 7th piano verification, technician for fixed crane operation, etc. I believe that I am a versatile person who can learn and adjust to anything. If I have a chance to work in your company, I would appreciate it so much and make an all-out effort. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 140.113.136.218 (臺灣) ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1565761428.A.9DA.html ※ 編輯: istee (140.113.136.218 臺灣), 08/14/2019 13:48:31

08/14 17:36, 6年前 , 1F
你中文面試會說: 我出生XX年?我家裡有X個人嗎?
08/14 17:36, 1F

08/14 21:16, 6年前 , 2F
推樓上,其實大多數時候不是英文的問題
08/14 21:16, 2F

08/15 09:01, 6年前 , 3F
他也沒說是面試時的講稿,可能只是公司要求附上的文件
08/15 09:01, 3F

08/15 11:39, 6年前 , 4F
重點不在是講稿還是文件,而是在於講出生幾年,家裡幾個
08/15 11:39, 4F

08/15 11:39, 6年前 , 5F
人,對於你應徵上有優勢?
08/15 11:39, 5F

08/15 13:03, 6年前 , 6F
同意一樓…講重點 經驗 興趣 目標 期望 整理好再翻英
08/15 13:03, 6F
了解,還以為那個家庭成員是必需,因為看網路上自傳範本都有就跟著寫了,謝謝大家的建議。 ※ 編輯: istee (140.113.136.218 臺灣), 08/15/2019 13:25:21

08/15 14:09, 6年前 , 7F
就是盡可能在簡短的介紹中讓人瞭解自己的優點 大多主管
08/15 14:09, 7F

08/15 14:09, 6年前 , 8F
都很忙
08/15 14:09, 8F

08/15 14:49, 6年前 , 9F
阿滴英文有一篇不錯啊
08/15 14:49, 9F

08/16 00:58, 6年前 , 10F
主詞也不要用太多I開頭,一搜尋不得了發現有29個...
08/16 00:58, 10F

08/16 00:59, 6年前 , 11F
沒有細看,不過第二段講家人可以整個砍掉,然後最後一
08/16 00:59, 11F

08/16 01:00, 6年前 , 12F
段有許多感覺跟你應徵外商無關的經歷都拿掉就是了...
08/16 01:00, 12F

08/16 01:01, 6年前 , 13F
整體的話文法錯誤滿多的...不過也許你先把架構清楚化
08/16 01:01, 13F

08/16 01:02, 6年前 , 14F
起來再來修文法會是比較好的方式
08/16 01:02, 14F

08/16 01:05, 6年前 , 15F
外商建議用CV or cover letter(不同國家不同稱呼)架構
08/16 01:05, 15F

08/16 01:05, 6年前 , 16F
來寫會比一整篇要人家重頭看到尾好得多,特別還要看流
08/16 01:05, 16F

08/16 01:07, 6年前 , 17F
水帳與錯誤文法,舉例:你講碩論那段,就可以條列貢獻
08/16 01:07, 17F

08/16 01:08, 6年前 , 18F
與應徵公司的連結,也會更清楚,講skills那邊不需要丟
08/16 01:08, 18F

08/16 01:10, 6年前 , 19F
一堆抽象名詞,直接列舉你做了什麼in layman's terms
08/16 01:10, 19F

08/16 01:11, 6年前 , 20F
學會半導體器材那邊也可以明確講出學會了什麼型號功能
08/16 01:11, 20F

08/16 01:12, 6年前 , 21F
這樣會直接凸顯你相較於其他人的優勢,直接看出鑑別度
08/16 01:12, 21F

08/16 01:13, 6年前 , 22F
大致上這樣,沒有太多時間就不一一細看了,祝工作順利
08/16 01:13, 22F
好的,真的非常感謝您!!! ※ 編輯: istee (140.113.136.219 臺灣), 08/19/2019 11:46:58
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