[文法] 請教一句很長的句子怎麼閱讀

看板Eng-Class作者 (Jiang)時間10年前 (2016/03/01 01:34), 編輯推噓1(1011)
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大家好, 最近在讀一篇文章時,讀到一句很長的句子,且有多個標點符號, 從文法上不太懂怎樣斷句,想請教大家。 原句如下: 行號 1 Sediments are also dropped where a river slows on entering a lake or the sea, 2 the deposited sediments are on a lake floor or the seafloor at first, 3 but will be located inland at some future date, 4 when the sea level falls or the land rises; 5 such beds are sometimes thousands of meters thick. 之前有學過兩個逗號之間的句子是要額外多描述一些逗號之前的名詞, 所以1,2,3行加起來,可以看成1+3, 2可以先不要看變成如下: Sediments are also dropped where a river slows on entering a lake or the sea but will be located inland at some future date. 但因為多了第4行,請問第4行是用來描述前面的date麼? 還是我的理解有錯誤。 感謝。 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 42.73.1.243 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1456767266.A.83A.html

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你那句子的標點符號有問題。看樣子是有人"背"題沒背全,
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或是某人抄錯句/符號,然後大家互相抄跟著出錯。這是原句
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都用when了...而且這句的第三部分是跟第二部分的,你的解
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法會把那個but搞成很奇怪
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http://tinyurl.com/hr5rrkz 從分號(;)處斷開
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I: Sediments are also dropped ...
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II: the deposited sediments ..., but ..... , when ...
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III: such beds are .....
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03/01 02:11, , 9F
"when ...."(副詞子句)是描述"but..."裡頭的"will be
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located"(動詞locate的未來被動式)(副詞的功能是修飾動詞
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03/01 02:12, , 12F
"之前有學過兩個...."-> 這只是眾多可能性之一
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