[請益] 請問文法是否有誤呢?

看板Eng-Class作者 (Just do it)時間11年前 (2014/10/03 15:31), 11年前編輯推噓1(1016)
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打了2個問題, 不知文法或內容是否怪怪的(文不對題之類), 就拜託大家幫我看看唷~ 先謝謝拉~ ************************************************** 問題一: What events in a person's life are most celebrated in your country? 回答: Taiwanese people celebrate in many events. When parents have a newborn baby in Taiwan, they will have a small feast. If getting married, couples will have a feast, too. In my opinion, in Taiwan wedding and having a baby are most celebrated in a person's life. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- 問題二: 2. What about the significance of gifts, are there particular presents that are given on particular occasions? 回答: In Taiwan, children get birthday cake from their parents to present their happiness and wish children safe and well. Take myself as an example, I got some beautiful flowers from my students in their graducation ceremony to present their thanks. I mean, gifts often present the givers feel grateful and delighted. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 210.71.68.152 ※ 文章網址: http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1412321499.A.6CE.html ※ 編輯: loveuk (114.37.227.109), 10/03/2014 19:12:47

10/03 23:00, , 1F
你打完有自己先看過一次嗎?
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10/03 23:03, , 2F
commerate? commemorate? http://ppt.cc/626J
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10/03 23:17, , 3F
"I mean, gifts are ..."這句也...
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10/03 23:22, , 4F
Take myself as an example ...我覺得會比較好。
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10/03 23:24, , 5F
第一段的結論來得有點莫名。
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10/03 23:26, , 6F
[parents give pupils...]這邊我覺得也應該要改一下...
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10/03 23:31, , 7F
[If getting married, newlywed couples...] newlyed
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10/03 23:32, , 8F
couples 是已婚了> <,前面是將要結婚> <
10/03 23:32, 8F
謝謝I大~ 是我粗心了,已修改完,這樣看起來還OK嗎? ^^ 非常感恩您寶貴的建議~ ※ 編輯: loveuk (36.224.171.61), 10/04/2014 00:21:51

10/04 00:40, , 9F
1. 你的回答算是文不對題。問題問的是"most celebrated"
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10/04 00:41, , 10F
,但是你的回答過於模糊/一般性。"General speaking"意思
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10/04 00:41, , 11F
過於廣泛(和most celebrated沾不上邊)。commemorate 也無
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10/04 00:41, , 12F
法表達"events ... most celebrated"的意思(不是most
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10/04 00:41, , 13F
celebrated的events照樣可以用commemorate來表示)。之後
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10/04 00:41, , 14F
你「隨便」舉3個例子也於事無補
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10/04 00:46, , 15F
commemorate 及物動詞... "with object"
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10/04 00:48, , 16F
present / represent? http://ppt.cc/SBEJ
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10/04 01:07, , 17F
感覺像是ibt的speaking
10/04 01:07, 17F
是speaking沒錯^^~ 謝謝樓上幾位,我改了一些句子,這樣有比較改善麻?~^^ 感謝大家 我想得很認真啦,沒有亂舉例的意思, 若有人這樣問我,我想我會這樣回答~^^ 不洽當之處,就拜託大家多指教啦~ ※ 編輯: loveuk (114.37.227.11), 10/04/2014 13:16:49
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