Re: [請益] 短英語演講稿文法勘誤求助

看板Eng-Class作者tengharold (RoadMan_A)時間9年前 (2014/08/13 13:02)推噓5(5推 0噓 19→)

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※ 引述《joanne770429 (trivia)》之銘言： : 這是我的自我介紹英語演講稿(4MINS)，非營利用XD : 個人的文法常常出錯，因此出醜>"< : 有人願意協助看看哪裡需改善嗎？感恩！ : Water (水) : Good evening, I'm Joanne. When I was a child, just like the whole world’s ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ : kids can’t be exception, my mom asked me that cliché question—what do you ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^once cliched 生硬 [打不出 accnt-e] : want to be in the future. I said “I want to be a president”. Later I grown when you grow up. president. Now that I : up and gradually know more about the social reality and myself, if now my mom am grown up and understand myself and society better, if my mom : ask me this question, I’ll say I want to be like the water. asks... ^now, water. : I know that’s an odd answer, rather than explain it I try to show you a ^so I'd like to show it. : performance. What’s the shape of the water now holding in my hand? Bottle. I'm now... It's shaped like the bottle. But... : But if I pour in to a jar like this. The shape changed instantly. On the way it into a , the water's shape changes instantly. : of pursuing my self in these 26 yrs, I found I’m interested in a lot of I've been searching for myself over the past 26 years, and I discovered... : areas, and, just like the water, I never hesitate to change my “shape”, I water, I'd never... ; I'm : always willing to try. ^ [try what?] : Such as..Even I was study in Foreign Language, I took information While I was studying in the Foreign Language department, I : communication as my minor. I ever joined an international student minored in information communication. I even... : organization, where I learned how to be a coordinator or leader, to lead issue leadership and coordination skills, and how to : based activities. My water characteristic is much more obvious on my lead issue-based... obviously illustrated : overseas travelling passion, I went China, Indonesia and Sri lanka for by my passion in traveling abroad. I've been to... , for : longest 2 months, I found I’m able to accommodate with different country as long as two months. I found that I'm able to adapt to different countries... : well, and I really love to appreciate the beauty of their and : culture/religion/food. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 這要怎麼念 XD，culture slash religion slash food 嗎 : Spiritually to say, I’m also water-like. Philosopher Lao tzu said: ”The , I'm ... : best of men is like water; water benefits all things and does not compete best men 還是 best of men : with them”. It means for its physical characteristic its simple and clear, Physically, water is simple... : and always stay lower humbly, but when it gathers, it can be the rain, the low. become : river, in the end even the sea, contains and fairly feeds all creatures. and even... holding and feeding all creatures fairly. : That’s just what I do or I want to be in my life. I love listen and help This is what I do and what I want to be. listening to and : others, normally I used to stay quiet but meanwhile I keep storing up myself helping others, usually I stay quiet but I am building my strength : to become a better person, and when the time for me is coming, I’ll ready to is right, I'll be ready to : spout like water to devote myself to this world. and benefit the world. : 謝謝大家～ -- 'Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, this life Trying to make ends meet, You're a slave to money then you die -Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 68.8.69.141 ※ 文章網址: http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1407906123.A.A07.html ※ 編輯: tengharold (68.8.69.141), 08/13/2014 13:07:39

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