[文法] 請問這樣打對嗎？
The Defrag utility in Windows OSes is a utility that helps to organizes fragmented files or data in a volume in order to gain performance. This is because that it can move relevant files around to each other in order to reduce the amount of time searching fragmented files all over the hard disk as well as extends a durability of a hard disk.
This is one of my assignments, the part I'm not sure is that do I use the" as well as " correctly? Cuz the sentence seems too long and redundant to me。appreciate for the help.
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