Re: [請益] 麻煩指正我的文章翻譯

看板Eng-Class作者hoch (Sanctuary)時間12年前 (2013/03/13 14:36)推噓19(19推 0噓 46→)

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※ 引述《tooth (tooth)》之銘言： : 我的小朋友說要參加演講，拿了一篇文章，要我翻譯， : 但我的英文不是很溜，盡力翻了， : 我把中文原稿及我的英文翻譯都PO在這裡，文章很長， : 但很希望能獲得大家的協助，幫忙指正是否有句子翻譯不通、文法或用字錯誤等。 : ************* : 標題: What I can do to help the environment? : 在我的生活中，媽媽會幫我洗衣服，哥哥姐姐會整理家裡，清潔隊員會打掃大家製 : 造的垃圾。在我的身旁，總是有人隨時會維護好居住的環境，然而，我從未為了保護 : 環境而付出。我能為自己所處的環境做些什麼呢?我可以做到三件事。 Compared to people who devote their time in environmental protection, I myself has never paid enough attention to issues concerning global warming and earth's fragile ecosystem. : In my daily life, my mother does the laundry for me, my sibilings clean : the house, and the trash collectors deal with garbage we make. There are : many people devote themselves to protecting the environment, whereas, I have : done nothing to protect the environment. What can I do to help our : environment? There are three things I can do. : 第一，搭乘大眾運輸工具。現今，我們有汽車或機車可以去想去的地方。然而， : 這些交通工具所排放的廢氣，卻污染了我們的環境。搭乘大眾交通工具，不僅可以 : 舒緩阻塞的交通，更減少了廢氣排放。 : First, I can take public transportation. In nowadays, we have cars or : motorcycles that we can go to any places. However, the emissions of those : mobiles pollute air and environment. By taking public transportation, we : can not only alleviate traffic jam, but also decrease air pollution. : 第二，改變習慣，節約能源。比如，早點熄燈就寢。此外，我還能關掉不使用的 : 電器電源，像是電視以及電腦。更進一步，我會珍惜我所擁有的東西，不丟掉能用的 : 物品。 : Second, I can change my habit for saving energy. For example switch off : the light and go to bed early. Also, I can turn off any appliances I am not : using such as TV and computer. What's more, I will cherish what I have and : I won't get rid of stuff that can be used. : 最後一點，我可以將物品降低用量、再利用及資源回收。首先，我會帶可重複使 : 用的杯子與餐具，此外，當我去購物時，我會自備環保袋。在倒垃圾前，我會先做好垃 : 圾分類，以減少垃圾量。 : Last but not the least, I can reduce, reuse and recycle the items I used. : I will start from carry my reusable cup and eating utensils. Moreover, when I : go shopping, I will prepare a green bag myself. As to the garbage, I will sort : it before I dump it so that we can reduces the trash in landfills. : 我認為，有良好的生活環境，大家才能健健康康快快樂樂的生活。從今天起，我要從 : 小地方做努力，如此一來，我們才能有良好的生活與良好的環境。 : To sum up, only when we have a great environment can we live in a : healthier and happier life. From now on, I will start from small things, : hence, we can have better life and better environment. : ***************** : 希望大家能不吝指教。 : 謝謝。 ※ 編輯: hoch 來自: 120.126.36.193 (03/13 14:38)

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