[求譯]跪求 請幫我看呂立是否通順 非常感恩

看板Eng-Class作者 (狗狗)時間13年前 (2013/01/27 20:44), 編輯推噓2(202)
留言4則, 4人參與, 最新討論串1/2 (看更多)
My name is Patty Lin.I am 22 years old, I come from a very happy nuclear family. Before 6 years old,I grew up in the 台中 with my grandmother because my family is Two-income household 台中 is a small city and most people there are farmer. I really like this town,people there are always friendly. I am the second child in my family, My mother always tell me that I am very independent and friendly. Throughout my academic years , I study in night school. I have a part time job in office and department store. Work in department store it was a great way to gain knowledge about interacting with customers and providing excellent customer service. and I found I like interaction with people. I am interested in learning language, Since I was a freshman, I start learn Japanese, and last year I also study korean . learning language brought me to the world opening my eyes and cultivating my mind Besides earning language I also have a wide range of hobbies. I love reading, writing, music and movies. I have my active side as well. I enjoy traveling and getting close to Nature a lot. It can balance in our lives. As to my personality, I am , optimistic, determined, willing to help others and down to earth. Also,it inspired my decision to become a flight attendant. I think I would be a great flight attendant because I enthusiastic, friendly and I will do my best. I can speak Chinese , Taiwanese , English ,japanese and korean, Most of all, I'm a person which is optimistic, enterprising dares to accept the challenge. Thanks very much for your time,and I look forward to hearing from you. 不知道順不順 QQ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 118.233.144.80

01/27 21:21, , 1F
nuclear family ??
01/27 21:21, 1F

01/27 21:38, , 2F
小家庭
01/27 21:38, 2F

01/28 06:56, , 3F
文法太多錯誤...用字也有問題..內容也不夠強
01/28 06:56, 3F

02/01 23:36, , 4F
真的文法跟語意都有問題
02/01 23:36, 4F
文章代碼(AID): #1H1I4zZl (Eng-Class)
文章代碼(AID): #1H1I4zZl (Eng-Class)