Re: [請益] 請各位大大幫我看一下我的英文自介
※ 引述《m13579 (瑪利亞)》之銘言：
: 因為要推甄所以希望各位大大可以幫我看一下
: 以下為一分鐘的自介
: My name is XXX, a student of OO university who major in Public Finance.
我個人覺得，說明自己用a student.....who major感覺很怪，好像不是在講自己的事
僅供參考啦
: As a student learning in the department of Public Finance. I have strong
: interest in economy, accounting and tax. Especially tax is the most field
: I want to do research on. And tax is also the focus of my department which
tax is the most field i want >>>>> tax is the field i want the most
And>>>> Moreover, In addition (僅供參考）
: different from other departments. Beside my major, I also study Japanese
........which is different from the other.......
: with minor. In the future, I want to be a college professor. The experience
: of teaching my classmates makes me realize that I have enthusiasm about
made me realize..........have enthusiasm for education
: education. And I like learning, too. Being a college professor, I can both
And 參考上述建議
: teach students and learn new knowledge. For this purpose, I apply your
learn new knowledge 建議改成 engage in specific studies
for this purpose(目的） >>>>> in order to fulfill my dream(of being a
professer) 為了實現我的夢想
: graduated school for building up my professional knowledge and the ability
: of research.
............knowledge and enable me to continue on further studies.
: 中文翻譯：
: 我叫作XXX，是OO大學財政系的學生。身為財政系的學生，我對於經濟、會計及租稅
: 有濃厚的興趣，尤其租稅領域為我未來想要進行研究的方向，而且有別於其他科系，
: 租稅為我的科系發展重點(因此我想要進行這方面的研究)。除了必修之外，我還輔修
: 了日文系。未來我想要成為一位大學教授。從教導同學的經驗中，我發覺自己對於
: 具有熱忱教育，另一方面我也熱愛學習，成為一名大學教授，我可以同時教育學生及
: 學習新知，為了這個目標，我申請了貴研究所以建立專業知識及研究能力。
: 請各位大大狠評謝謝@@
以上都僅供參考，不過感覺還有很多發揮空間，用字要小心一點
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