Fw: [寫作] 請各位幫我改作文...
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作者: jt910203 (aa) 看板: GEPT
標題: [寫作] 請各位幫我改作文...
時間: Fri Jan 27 22:53:54 2012
這題目是中級複試的
題目是要寫出電子郵件對我們的影響之類的
With the development of the Internet,e-mail is getting more and more popular,
we nearly can not do any work without e-mail. For example, I am used to
logging my e-mail to receive some pieces of news and entertainment
information that will kill my boring time and make me relax. The most
important function of email for me, is to hand out my papers to professors.
E-mail is also playing an important role in business. For instance, in my
intern company, they always use e-mail to do a lot of things like checking
the order list or businessing with clients. It can save more time and money
than traditional methods like telephone and letter. As a result, e-mail is so
convenient for all of us.
請各位大大幫我改一下,並且幫我看看這樣的水準...複試會不會過
3q!
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