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My mother's favorite colors are pink and purple,because she thinks that colors
are young.One of the colors of pink is that it say about her personality is
that she loves to laugh and don't take things too seriously. And the other one
is purple that it say about her personality is that she likes to be alone and
"do your own thing ."Those statements are true for her , because I have never
seen my mother have any depressed expression on her face , and she is really
do her own thing! For example,if the things that I want to buy A and she want
to buy B ,she will agree to me and buy B . Anyway , I am so happy that I have a
delightful and sweet family.
如果有文法上 或單字用法錯誤 請大家用力鞭我!! 謝謝>"<
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