Re: [請益] 可以幫我訂正一下自我介紹嗎

看板Eng-Class作者BEN770430 (阿Ben)時間14年前 (2011/07/08 08:11)推噓1(1推 0噓 9→)

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※ 引述《jaaaab22 (Dabby)》之銘言： : 可以幫我糾正文法或不自然的用法嗎 : 謝謝 : I was born in Kaohsiung. Father works in Taiwan Power Company, and Mother My father my : is a beautiful housewife. I have two brothers and a sister, all of us grown and we all grew : up in a lovely house. Four years ago, I came to Taipei for learning by went : myself. It pushed me to be a independent person. , which pushed me an : In my four years of college, I joined to the volleyball club and badminton During my four years college life, : club. In sports club, spirit of teamwork is necessary. Thanks to that, I In sport clubs, the spirit , which helped me : could learned how to get along well with my friends. And, I did a lot of learn how Also, : part-time job in my college life. It could not only extend my social life, jobs 這邊不用再說一次這段開頭就說過了 : but also learn the skill how to deal with the problem. help me learn the skills about how to deal with problems. : In my spare time, I like singing and watching foreign TV show.Singing shows : could release my pressure and watching TV show or program could enrich my helps me release shows programs enriches : knowledge. I always try to learn the thing that I never know. things I have never heard. : Thank you for listen to my introduction. listening 僅供參考希望是沒改錯 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 24.241.229.209

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