Re: [請益] cover letter 內容,麻煩指正與指導...
※ 引述《silenceblue (remind of deep silence)》之銘言:
: 麻煩各位了第一次寫Cover letter,想要應徵德商的約聘行政助理
: Dear Miss Lin:
: I think that C.B. (Certification Body) is a specialized and potential region.
field
: XXX is the top in this region. There are the completed organization,
field integrated
: excellent corporate culture and colleague competition. I am writing in
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
: response to your occupation for a administrate assistant on the website of
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這句話會讓人誤解 你在回應她的邀約,而且文法有誤
: 104 bank. I know that to hand CB project or BSMI project is a huge challenge,
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handle
: and I would do my best to assign every project.
: I had gotten master degree in apply physics in the National Chung Cheng
the Master degree
: University. I also did my research in the surface physics laboratory. I got
: better understanding of Science. Additionally, I am an active person, who is
加一個a ^^^^^^^^
省略
: willing to learn new things that work needed, and believe that my ability is
requires
: suitable for the position.
: I look forward to have an opportunity to interview with you. If you contact
having the .... You can contact
: me at 09xx-xxx-xxx or a mail, we could schedule an appointment. And I am
with me
: appreciated that you would find time to read this.
grateful could
: Sincerely,
我能力有限,只能這樣幫你修。
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