[請益] 英文自我介紹有哪裡需要修改的呢?

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Good afternoon Sir. First,thank you very much for giving me the chance for interview. My name is Kuanfu.I graduated one and a half years ago from National Changhua University of Education,and obtained Master degree in the Institude of Communi cation Engineering.I majored in Microwave Communication, and my research speci alty included antenna design and microwave circuit design,such as microstrip a ntenna,circularly polarized antenna,array antenna,high gain antenna,and pas sive microwave circuit design.In my research experience,I had been the resear ch assistant of National Science Council and research topic of the project is a bout circularly polarized reflectarry design.In second grade of master,I publis hed a conference paper on the National Symposium on Telecommunications(NST),and finished my master's thesis in third grade of master.Field of research for mast er's thesis is about Artificial Magnetic Conduttor(AMC) design for improving ra diation efficiency of antenna. During my study in the university and the gradua te school,my major courses included Physics,Engineering Mathematics,Macroele ctronics,Electric Circuits, Engineering Electromagnetics and Microwave Enginee ring,furthermore also got good grades on the courses.I have confidence to do a good job base on my strong professional ability and good personality if I have the chance to work for your company.I think I can make some positive contribut ions to your company in the future. Hopefully,I will be given the opportunity to work in your company.I will surely make every effort to meet and even exce ed your expectation.Finally,thanks for listening to my self-introduction. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 自我介紹裡面有幾個專有名詞可能要有理工背景的人才看的懂@@ Institude of Communication Engineering(電信工程研究所) Microwave Communication(微波通訊) National Symposium on Telecommunications(NST)(全國電信研討會) Conference paper(研討會論文) National Science Council(國科會計劃) Engineering Electromagnetics(工程電磁學) Macroelectronics(微電子學) Engineering Mathematics(工程數學) Electric Circuits(電路學) Antenna(天線) 最近要去公司面試主管要我準備一下英文自我介紹 但是我的英文蠻爛的 想好幾天才擠出來 那可以請板上前輩幫我看看這個英文自我介紹有哪裡需要修改的嘛? -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 210.240.64.103 ※ 編輯: kuanfu 來自: 210.240.64.103 (12/12 12:35)
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