Re: [請益] 自我介紹修改
※ 引述《xry0608 (xry)》之銘言：
就淺薄能力稍微修改
沒仔細請見諒
(後面看不太懂 sorry)
: Introduce myself
: About my family: my dad was a soldier, but he is a teacher who is teaching in
: University now. He is good at electronics. My mom is a teacher who is
: teaching in elementary school. My brothers, Robert and Richard, are studying
: in medical colleges. Theirs grades were very good when they in the
: senior high school. I must be as hard working as them to study. I wish all of
: my family proud of me.
My dad, a soldier versed in electronics, is a teacher teaching in university,
My mom is an elementary school teacher. My brothers, Robert and Richard,
both of whom passed with flying colors in senior high, are now medics.
To gratify my parents, I study hard.
: About myself: I am the youngest person in my family, so my parents worry
: about me a lot. But I must say, that is enough! Certainly, I can feel their
: love when they care about me. I like reading and writing, because I can feel
: happy and not lonely when I doing these. I also can play the piano, but this
: is not the best activity of mine. I just had learned piano since I was
: studying junior high school at the first grade.
: I just interested in it and not practice for contest, so I can enjoy it and
: never tired of piano. When I playing it, I can feel not only cheerful but
: also complacent. I can enjoy beautiful sounds that I make. Grades did not
: bother me before I studying senior high school. In elementary school and
: junior high school, I just need to study before the exam. But in senior high
: school, I have to study everyday.
Being the youngest in my family, my parents are rather concerned about me.
They love me a lot. I delight in reading and writing, for every time I
do so I feel that I am not all alone. I play the piano as well, but since
my first piano lesson commenced in seventh grade, I can't yet play it with
a light hand. As long as not practicing for recitals, I won't grow
bored with playing the piano, during which time I feel joy and complacency.
Acing in each exam hadn't become a headache until I entered high school.
In both grade school and middle school, to get an A, all I had to do
was pull an all-nighter, whereas in high school, on the contrary,
I have to work hard every day to top the class.
: 請大大們幫忙修改這篇自我介紹，
: 句子下面是依我的能力會修改的部份 囧(說不一定還錯)
: 拜託了m(_ _)m
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