[請益] 幫我修一下一分鐘口試稿

看板Eng-Class作者 (運動傷害)時間15年前 (2010/06/21 20:06), 編輯推噓2(2推 0噓 12→)
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學生要去考國中的英資班 有一分鐘的口試 題目是Why should you choose me? 以下是我幫他寫的稿子 怕有錯誤的字及文法 麻煩各位高手幫我看一下囉 I have learned English for about ten years. For me, English is as familiar as Chinese since I spend a lot of time on it. I go to the English cram school five days a week. I never complain of the busy learning days because English has become part of my life. Because of my effort, I am always the one in the name of my school to attend the English speech competition. I ever won the first prize in the county competition when I was grade 2. Teachers usually tell me that I have a talent for English, which makes me confident to learn it. I am learning English all the time, and I wish I can keep it in my junior high school life. I desire school would give me the chance to get further English knowledge. TKS 這個學生很優秀 很希望他能繼續深造 -- ╭╮ 《襄兒》 ζvictorina◣ ╰● 我走過山的時候山不說話，我路過海的時候海不說話； ╭╮ 我坐著的毛驢一步一步滴滴答答，我帶著的倚天喑啞。 ╰● 大家說我因為愛著神雕大俠，找不到所以在峨嵋安家； ▁ ╭╮ 其實我只是喜歡此地的霧，像十六歲那年綻放的煙花。▉襄▏ ╰● ——北大未名 AngleMiao ▇ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 163.30.170.207 ※ turnoff11:轉錄至看板 TeachEnglish 06/21 20:07
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06/21 20:29, , 1F
這位國中生的程度很好@@""
06/21 20:29, 1F
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06/21 20:30, , 2F
I spend a lot of time on it.
06/21 20:30, 2F
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06/21 20:31, , 3F
=> I've put a lot of time into learning it.
06/21 20:31, 3F
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06/21 20:33, , 4F
I am always the one in the name of my school...
06/21 20:33, 4F
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06/21 20:36, , 5F
=> I am always the student sent by my school..
06/21 20:36, 5F
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06/21 20:36, , 6F
(也可以用 on behalf of.. 如果國中有教這個的話)
06/21 20:36, 6F
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06/21 20:37, , 7F
(in the name of 藉著..的名義)
06/21 20:37, 7F
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06/21 20:38, , 8F
I ever won the first prize in the county competition..
06/21 20:38, 8F
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06/21 20:40, , 9F
=> I won first prize in the county competition
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06/21 20:41, , 10F
I can keep it in my junior high school life..
06/21 20:41, 10F
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06/21 20:42, , 11F
=> I can keep up with it in junior high school
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06/21 20:42, , 12F
I desire => I hope
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06/21 20:43, , 13F
to get further English knowledge => get a better
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06/21 20:43, , 14F
knowledge of English
06/21 20:43, 14F
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