Re: [請益] 能否幫我改一小段文章...
※ 引述《sluggard (~Halcyon Days~)》之銘言：
: 這是我自己寫的，但是總覺得有地方怪怪的，
: 可是因為本身英文不太好，所以還是不知道怎麼改...
: 希望版上的大大們能夠幫忙指點，謝謝！！
: ....(略) However, the same approach may work for different people at a
: certain time but may not work the next time; certain approaches may work
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: for some people but may not work for others as well.
: To sum up, the most important thing for the manager to know when choosing
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the most important thing to know when the manager chooses...
副詞子句與主要子句主詞不一致不可省略
: an approach is that any technique may both advantages and disadvantages,
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缺動詞
: so deciding which approach to choose could be hard. The only thing that the
: manager can do is to find a way with the best balance between advantages and
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: disadvantages, and depend on more specific situations to make the final
: decision, such as cost, available resource, size and demographic of
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: organizational members, long-term or short-term program, etc.
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: 首先，不知道能不能先幫我看看是不是有很多文法錯誤...
: 再來就是不知道能不能幫助我改善英文表達，
: 我覺得我寫起來好像國小作文喔XDD
: 真的非常謝謝^__^》
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