[請益]句子裡面有Although又有if,標點符號怎嚜擺?

看板Eng-Class作者 (拉拉拉)時間14年前 (2010/05/16 13:19), 編輯推噓1(104)
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Although the article states that if the moon is formed form earth, the material, like the water, on moon should be quite the same as on earth, he says that due to the impact, the moon should be in very high temperature, and the water should be evaporating in this situation. 一個句子裡面有althoug又有if又有due to 還有補充說明(like the water)真的很 不確定可不可以這樣寫....可以幫我批改一下嗎....這個問題困擾我好久了Orz -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 123.204.214.217

05/16 13:33, , 1F
這句很對呀 只是真的長了點 其實一點都不複雜
05/16 13:33, 1F

05/16 13:35, , 2F
等等...好像不太對...he says that 前面要嘛要有and 要
05/16 13:35, 2F

05/16 13:35, , 3F
不然就重新另開一句話
05/16 13:35, 3F

05/16 14:52, , 4F
不需要and阿,該句只是很長..而已~XD
05/16 14:52, 4F

05/16 15:23, , 5F
所以我這樣寫可以囉?? 感謝大家的解答^___^
05/16 15:23, 5F
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