[閒聊] 不起眼女主角培育法...小說文筆是不是...已回收
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剛剛把不起眼女主角培育法的小說拿起來翻
怎麼說呢...
文筆是不是...
不太好啊?
不知道是翻譯的關係還是原作就是這樣
總覺得滿多地方看起來都有點吃力
敘述看起來有點亂
而且啊...
小說裡面燻雞惠的個性...
好像跟動畫有點微妙的差距
感覺沒像動畫那麼不起眼...
是我的錯覺嗎?
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