[閒聊] 仙逆...一本很可怕的書
因為在一個網站看到十大好看修真小說,
選了半天就點了「仙逆」開始看。
現在看到第一百多章,
我決定要棄書了。
原因:這作者文筆很不好。
故事情節天馬行空,各種道具的設定很多元很奇妙,很繽紛很吸引人
但是,
他想介紹的世界觀點很多,想多介紹各種細節
但是讀起來很雜,很跳。
往往寫到一半,會跳回去解釋先前的情節,再往下講故事
情緒常被中斷。
我覺得很可惜。再好的情節編排和故事內容,如果文筆不好
那就真的不必多花時間再看
我不懂,這本真的不應該列入十大必讀修真小說。
我很生氣我浪費了四天在看。
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