Re: [閒聊] 為什麼主角都用劍?
就幾個場景描述一下,看看用劍格調有沒有比較高...
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「劍長3呎重2.3斤,劍名無恆,請賜教。」
「棒長7呎重82斤,棒名無常,請賜教。」
感覺出自裏本,也許也適合當主角...
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隨著白衣俠士緩步走來,只聞萬劍齊鳴,眾人長劍紛紛脫手飛出
並列兩旁,彷彿迎接著君王的到來
隨著白衣俠士緩步走來,只聞萬槍齊鳴,眾人長槍紛紛脫手飛出
並列兩旁,彷彿迎接著君王的到來
總覺得萬槍齊鳴,接著被打成蜂窩比較順...槍脫手接掉槍禁假到退伍...
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話畢青光亮起,即見其踏劍而行,禦劍遠去
話畢青光亮起,即見其踏刀而行,禦刀遠去
松鼠航討厭當霸刀似乎也有些道理
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「劍客?何不亮劍一敘?」
「雙節棍客?何不亮雙節棍一敘?」
忽然發現,用雙節棍、狼牙棒可以水一點字數....
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