[閒聊] 玄衍神術&大道爭鋒
這兩本阿...
前面還是個好書
後面越寫越像是換個人寫,而且還像是同一個人在寫
下筆越來越像是故意裝古體之類的東西
硬梆梆,咬文嚼字,偏偏文筆又不夠好,搞的本來看的很輕鬆的優秀現代敘述
弄的跟乾柴一樣,畫虎不成反類犬就是在講這個
兩本相比大道比玄衍更嚴重
只要對比一下開頭跟最新進度就能明顯看
大道一開始久久唸一次詩詞感覺超棒
後面不管怎樣就是要唸一下..
真的是好可惜的兩本書弄的我棄追,剛剛翻出來看真的是看不了幾章
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