[閒聊] 贅婿 (有人覺得很拖稿嗎?)
上次看實況看到黃帝被殺
就把本來毒發的書又拿來看看
目前正在追進度...
有人覺得李師師出現的章節都很拖稿嗎...
看到出現都立馬快轉
覺得在宋朝這個年代寫男女之情
香焦實在寫的很糟糕
就各個女人之間我分不出來有什麼不同
個性都差不多一樣
寫皇帝的部份也很拖稿阿...
三不五時來個中二病內心戲
更不用說各大臣一直跳出來講些屁話
反正就是可以快轉
絲毫不影響後面劇情的閱讀
就無用的角色亂七八糟的多
很多根本不記得誰是誰
也沒啥存在感
有人也覺得鋪梗鋪的太長太無聊嗎?
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