[求書] 有沒有人物個性刻畫不錯的
看了很多起點月票榜上的
對手永遠覺得是天驕,可以虐主角反被虐
女角永遠那套模式,不是先冰冷就是大剌剌的誰都靠近不了,然後莫名其妙愛上主角
前輩永遠那套智商活了那麼久,保命手段都沒有就被主角扮豬吃老虎
主角整天在那自言自語也不知道講給誰聽…(作者為了讓讀者了解整天讓主角自己跟自己
說話Orz)
求糧草仙草,至少一百五十萬字起跳,不要太瘦…
另外毒點是星球、宇宙…
沒什麼科學常識然後整天寫飄在外太空換星球虐菜這我很受不了…
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