[嘗毒] 萬界天王
http://big5.qidian.com/Book/3104029.aspx
一個讓人眼睛一亮的開頭
角色的個性豐滿
作者的文字洗鍊 讀起來就是舒服
但我還是要給嘗毒...
為什麼呢
(以下是... 不喜勿入)
他X的又是這種沒有個性然後看到妹子就腿軟的主角
這種橋段現在真的還行的通嗎...
你寫個有個性一點的主角能死嗎...
雖然目前還沒到不能忍受的地步
但白銀之歌就是看到東方戀雪被鳳香婊了之後還不生氣我就大翻白眼
然後從此棄書
這種東西對我來說真的是巨大毒點...
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