[創作] Green Man

看板poetry作者 (羅拔)時間5年前 (2019/02/23 19:43), 5年前編輯推噓1(1推 0噓 6→)
留言7則, 2人參與, 5年前最新討論串1/1
Green man loves green food vegetable, cucumber and Avocado. These are all his homesickness, reminding him home. Green man cuts his green hair for he wants something different. Yet everything he sees is green for he has green eyeballs. Now he is lost in a forest. Since all the roads are green, he does not know how to go home. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 1.162.229.172 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/poetry/M.1550922204.A.69F.html ※ 編輯: korn31910 (1.162.229.172), 02/23/2019 19:43:47
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02/24 12:09, 5年前 , 1F
interesting, but . . . watermelon???
02/24 12:09, 1F
※ 編輯: korn31910 (101.9.194.199), 02/24/2019 12:48:58
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02/24 12:53, 5年前 , 2F
I am thinking about it, too. For a watermelon is al
02/24 12:53, 2F
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02/24 12:53, 5年前 , 3F
so red or yellow. XD
02/24 12:53, 3F
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02/25 10:48, 5年前 , 4F
i've never seen a watermelon with green pulp
02/25 10:48, 4F
※ 編輯: korn31910 (101.9.194.199), 02/25/2019 18:45:21
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02/25 18:46, 5年前 , 5F
Revised from watermelon to guava XD
02/25 18:46, 5F
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02/26 20:05, 5年前 , 6F
but isn't guava pulp white...? (never satisfied)
02/26 20:05, 6F
※ 編輯: korn31910 (49.216.196.207), 03/16/2019 18:36:44
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03/16 18:37, 5年前 , 7F
I revised it again to avocado XD
03/16 18:37, 7F
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