[創作] Substance

看板poetry作者 (羅拔)時間10年前 (2014/06/15 23:05), 10年前編輯推噓5(500)
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I stop writing For the past has no shape It swells, and blocks my way out I throw away my pen, surrender Say, I have no shape either But just want to pretend Having a core, or some more I start turning off The button of sensation And turning on The power saving mode By some same warm smiles I eat, I sleep, I see You in the shape of a blooming cloud Whereas you could never see -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 61.228.71.33 ※ 文章網址: http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/poetry/M.1402844743.A.5C7.html ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:06:04 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:10:02 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:10:12 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:11:39 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:11:53 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:12:39 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:13:11 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:13:57 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:14:12 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:15:36 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:16:47 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:23:58 ※ 編輯: korn31910 (61.228.71.33), 06/15/2014 23:30:15

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06/17 16:27, , 4F
I like the word 'blooming'!
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06/22 17:27, , 5F
Nice, welcome back
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文章代碼(AID): #1JdRP7N7 (poetry)