[創作] dislikes

看板poetry作者 (hate summer)時間10年前 (2014/04/17 18:33), 編輯推噓3(306)
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There are times when the sun never sets Like the Arctic or Antarctica There are times when you can't look away You became restless, but not always to the exit There are times when dogs aren't dogs and gods are not gods You know them deep inside, but not always brave to prove it There are times when you put them down into words Words are formed in verified ways So you may escape the blame There are times when you choose not to cry or to get mad You know there will always be some dislikes But you will never call them a poem -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 42.74.225.156 ※ 文章網址: http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/poetry/M.1397730829.A.27A.html

04/17 19:12, , 1F
mmm....a good one indeed
04/17 19:12, 1F

04/18 11:21, , 2F
But you will never call them a poem
04/18 11:21, 2F

04/18 11:22, , 3F
. . . even though in fact that's exactly what you
04/18 11:22, 3F

04/18 11:22, , 4F
did
04/18 11:22, 4F

04/18 11:22, , 5F
XD
04/18 11:22, 5F

04/18 14:54, , 6F
this is in response to some lousy things i saw
04/18 14:54, 6F

04/18 14:57, , 7F
which at best can be called word vomit
04/18 14:57, 7F

04/18 15:35, , 8F
XD
04/18 15:35, 8F

04/19 20:26, , 9F
some "poems" are like that
04/19 20:26, 9F
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