[創作] Some Girls

看板poetry作者 (羅拔)時間10年前 (2013/10/10 18:51), 編輯推噓3(302)
留言5則, 5人參與, 最新討論串1/1
Some girls are winds Some girls are wings Some girls are melodies They make you fly and make you sink Until you're old and become a tree But they don't cease They dance, deep inside your roots -- Sent from my Android -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.231.170.41

10/11 13:58, , 1F
Please also write about some boys...
10/11 13:58, 1F

10/12 08:21, , 2F
XD 還是妳來寫一首? 來湊個"兄妹作"
10/12 08:21, 2F

10/12 18:05, , 3F
become 的主詞也有可能是They...
10/12 18:05, 3F

10/26 02:01, , 4F
1F+1 XD
10/26 02:01, 4F

04/29 22:52, , 5F
@lovejessie19 sink 後面有個隱藏逗點XD
04/29 22:52, 5F
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