[創作] So did I this white envelope unfold

看板poetry作者 (L'amor Celeste)時間12年前 (2012/01/10 20:22), 編輯推噓2(201)
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So did I this white envelope unfold With my shaking hands and faint-beating heart The lovely replying lines to behold: Would Fate smile on me or from me depart? "Dear Amadeus" was the initial part. "Dear" she called me! O heavenly address! So cheap a mark pierced me as Eros' dart! Downward my eyes moved in full-loaded stress, To find the cruel sentence of "no" or "yes," But nothing was there save a lukewarm thank That led to the most common ending bless, So I sighed at this leaf truly blank: Dear Love, do not wish me happy to be, For my happiness is decided by thee. 最近在試Spenserian sonnet 請大家多多指教~ -- Rage, rage against the dying of the light! ---Dylan Thomas(1914-1953) -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.119.203.47 ※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 140.119.203.47 (01/10 20:24) ※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 140.119.203.47 (01/10 20:24) ※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 140.119.203.47 (01/10 20:27)

01/10 21:55, , 1F
nice!
01/10 21:55, 1F

01/20 18:57, , 2F
唉呀突然發現bless不是名詞...囧
01/20 18:57, 2F

02/23 15:01, , 3F
like!
02/23 15:01, 3F
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