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看板poetry作者 (Who's ur daddy?)時間12年前 (2011/10/12 00:47), 編輯推噓3(304)
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Many have remembered him as one of the walking dead, whom they say only perceive their livings in an eternal present. Time never lapse in that dimension. Joyful it is for them, but they never learnt the cruelty of their existence. Living in a lie that mesmerizes the lotus eater. Suffering the fate of them who Are condemned to burn eternally In the deep abyss of Tartarus. But never did he knows. He lived his whole life in a fictitious world, Reality was to him an unintelligble concept because in Reality he never lived. ============================================================================== 初次創作,見笑了。 ============================================================================== -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.113.62.21

10/12 06:01, , 1F
Not bad at all
10/12 06:01, 1F

10/12 08:30, , 2F
wonderful poetic depth! but i have to be annoying
10/12 08:30, 2F

10/12 08:30, , 3F
and say that you can shore up your grammar a bit
10/12 08:30, 3F

10/12 08:30, , 4F
(s-v agreement)
10/12 08:30, 4F

10/12 09:14, , 5F
Welcome! :D
10/12 09:14, 5F

10/12 09:20, , 6F
"unintelligible"
10/12 09:20, 6F

10/13 16:56, , 7F
thx for the comment guys~I'll try to work harder=)
10/13 16:56, 7F
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