[創作]I lay in the wintry sunlight with ease

看板poetry作者 (L'amor Celeste)時間13年前 (2010/11/12 14:47), 編輯推噓5(503)
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I lay in the wintry sunlight with ease, And Zephyr caressed my leisure body, With fair Solitude's faithful company, Whose omnipresence did me so much please. There on my knees rested some leaves in peace: The lines of the Ever-Enclosed Lady. "The lonely Rambling Stone is so happy;" He said, "in sole freedom joy shall increase!" Yet in a sudden halted was our delight. Walking by hand in hand was a sweet Pair, To whom I tried to give a carefree sneer, But choked was I by their amorous air, So I turned to my friend Solitude dear, Whom I found fleeing in a shameful flight. -- Where words fail, music speaks. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.119.172.47 ※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 140.119.172.47 (11/12 14:50)

11/12 15:53, , 1F
now THAT is a great twist!
11/12 15:53, 1F

11/12 16:14, , 2F
experience of being 閃ed yesterday~
11/12 16:14, 2F

11/12 16:32, , 3F
Nice done! Beautiful and interesting!
11/12 16:32, 3F

11/12 16:36, , 4F
Hope I can also 閃 others one day ._.
11/12 16:36, 4F

11/12 17:39, , 5F
got the picture lol
11/12 17:39, 5F

11/12 19:19, , 6F
Isn't "sunlit" an adjective?
11/12 19:19, 6F

11/12 19:35, , 7F
yes, of sunlight
11/12 19:35, 7F

11/12 20:06, , 8F
thanks for the correction!
11/12 20:06, 8F
※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 140.119.203.47 (11/12 20:07)
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