[創作] The end

看板poetry作者 (漫步中的哈哈星人)時間13年前 (2010/10/23 10:40), 編輯推噓3(302)
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We've come to the beginning of the end The end of not having to pretend To be ourselves once again In the end of the end We're down to the top of the bottom The bottom of happiness and pain For not being ourselves at random At the bottom of the bottom We're forgetting how to remember Yet we remember how we forget We're foregetting what we forget But we remember the end of the end -- █ ▌█◥ █ ▌█◥ │◥ ██ █◥ ▉★ ▊★ ▉◥ ◤◥ ▉◥ ◤◥ _◣ ▉ ◤◥ ◤\ ◤\ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 210.54.148.202

10/23 16:17, , 1F
got lost...but very lyrical!!
10/23 16:17, 1F

10/24 06:31, , 2F
I confuse myself sometimes :)
10/24 06:31, 2F

10/30 01:42, , 3F
I like its rhythm!
10/30 01:42, 3F

11/07 22:03, , 4F
the last line's enigmatic
11/07 22:03, 4F

11/08 06:00, , 5F
:)
11/08 06:00, 5F
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