[創作] Sonnet of the Pretending Post-pursuer

看板poetry作者 (CJ)時間15年前 (2010/10/11 21:08), 編輯推噓4(402)
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You say I'm fighting for a losing cause, My loving cooes do barely give you pause; That my continuing denial of Th'impossibility of gaining love From your illuminating charity Is causing you endless anxiety. You'll never budge or be moved or be wowed Regardless of what things I say, or how. I cannot seem to pass through your facade And work upon your heart, to try and mod- Ify your level of attraction, and Put your infatuation in my hand. But how can I stop my pursuit of love If you my heart has never been full of? I was reminded after finishing this that the Shakespearean sonnet has an alter- nating rhyme scheme. Oh, I am fortune's fool . . . . -- 計畫趕不上變化 戀愛衝不破阻礙 http://www.wretch.cc/blog/spacedunce5 http://www.wretch.cc/blog/jsengstudio -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.228.86.31

10/11 22:56, , 1F
第三個quatrain的拆字很有趣!
10/11 22:56, 1F

10/11 22:56, , 2F
希望板上可以吹起一陣商賴風~
10/11 22:56, 2F

10/13 10:57, , 3F
amadeus可以分享一下關於商賴風的知識
10/13 10:57, 3F

10/13 10:58, , 4F
^^
10/13 10:58, 4F

10/13 22:32, , 5F
celestia的free verse也很棒啊!
10/13 22:32, 5F
※ 編輯: spacedunce5 來自: 61.228.84.141 (10/13 23:23)

10/14 19:52, , 6F
Thanks *^^*
10/14 19:52, 6F
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