[創作] Now I gaze at his savage countenance

看板poetry作者 (L'amor Celeste)時間14年前 (2010/02/09 14:50), 編輯推噓1(106)
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Now I gaze at his savage countenance: Coarse surface, gross hair, a pair of dull eyes, In a distorted mirror, where he lies In the air of baseness and ignorance. So I ask: "What sort of desperate chance Thou deemst thou ownst to toss the fatal dice Of love?" And in a blast he painfully cries--- The fierce fire of shame puts on a dire dance, Trapping him in ceaseless torment, whose frame Begins to dissolve, diffuse, dissipate;* The dread pyre consumes all in ash and dirt, But a heart remains, without ruth nor hate, Fine and firm in the core; I shall not blame His transgression, for I know: it doth hurt. *from Samuel Taylor Coleridge's Biographia Literaria -- Amor vincit omnia. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.36.241.4 ※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 114.36.241.4 (02/09 14:52) ※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 114.36.241.4 (02/09 14:53) ※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 114.36.241.4 (02/09 14:57)

02/09 17:57, , 1F
Typo: 1st stanza last word: furnace
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02/09 17:58, , 2F
and what part is coleridge's?
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02/09 18:50, , 3F
oh~I didn't notice that, thank you!
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02/09 18:51, , 4F
the three d verbs are from his
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02/09 18:52, , 5F
discussion on fancy and imagination
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※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 114.36.241.4 (02/09 18:54)

02/09 19:07, , 6F
So I have to consider the rhyme
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02/09 19:07, , 7F
scheme again...
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※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 114.36.241.4 (02/09 20:09) ※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 114.36.241.4 (02/09 20:41) ※ 編輯: amadeus1223 來自: 114.36.241.4 (02/10 09:56)
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