[請益] 初次嘗試
突然興起寫了首詩紀念最近的日子
希望大家給我一些建議
Agony no longer exists within me anymore
Numbness took me over as a whole
First I shivered at the sight of him during lunch
despite the heat and the midday sun
Recalling the unspeakable morning I came to grief
it surprised me with my very own sigh of relief
I curse no one and blame no one
It is written for things to have gone
We are far apart and contrary
Our lack of devotion made this dreary
No one can stand the distance and lonliness
Filling my time with constant emptiness
The retrospect of video made me smile
as I wandered lonely down the aisle
It is truth that there's no bright future
I am glad I get the picture
Fate may brought us together
Yet no need to ruffle one's feather
Thank you for the time we shared
and the days I felt so secure and cared
就只有這些了
我的韻腳和對仗做的沒有很好
拜託各位 多多指教了
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