[請益] 初創作

看板poetry作者 (浪漫主義者)時間16年前 (2008/05/25 22:32), 編輯推噓2(2推 0噓 0→)
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月下美人 Moon, radiant in the sky, shining less than belle, Graceful and tender, beholds whoever bewitched Pure the moon embroidered against the cloud Her figure, defined by the moonlight, lured. Walking easy and shapes delicate, whoever watches invited Corners shined with its appearance, what an eminent moonlight belle. For fairest creature, vexed he becomes Tender and graceful, who plays obsessed -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.224.204.113 ※ 編輯: kkben 來自: 61.216.151.64 (05/25 23:32)
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05/26 12:13, , 1F
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05/26 19:56, , 2F
makes me obsessed --> obsesses me ?
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