[創作] heart

看板poetry作者 (相信即是開始)時間16年前 (2007/10/01 21:02), 編輯推噓1(102)
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I love you forever if you take care of my heart lie is not always lie if you understand you will find what is my true heart if you misunderstanding that is not your fault cause anyone of us will know that only love is not enough my knowledge come from my experience from life if you do not to touch what i think you will never know my pain so I will take care of myself and wish everyone worldwide will find the one they love will find the dream they search for for me that is music , reading , movie, comic,etc and for you you wish what you are the choice is up for you to find not to ask me anymore pls and goodluck goodbye -- 我才發現 夢想與現實間的差別 逆著風 讓自己體驗每一個感覺 就像是寓言 流淚喜悅看過這一天 我想追 追尋完美的世界 我還要飛 飛得很高很遠在我的世界 我的自由 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 123.195.24.252

10/06 18:27, , 1F
除非是特意的 一些像是標點符號,
10/06 18:27, 1F

10/06 18:28, , 2F
細部文法, 句子斷句的部分可以稍加調整
10/06 18:28, 2F

10/06 18:28, , 3F
相信就會是更有力量的創作 :)
10/06 18:28, 3F
文章代碼(AID): #170E_SW6 (poetry)