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看板poetry作者 (反向操作)時間19年前 (2004/11/19 09:12), 編輯推噓10(1000)
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I can write the sweetest love song of all tonight write,for intance,"i wanna die while you love me while yet you hold me fair while laughter lies upon my lips and lights are in my hair." but music,when real loves die,vibrates in the memory like candle burns at both ends, it will not last the night now that i am without you, all is so desolate and all that once was so beautiful is dead i can write the saddest love song of all tonight to think i've never have him, to think that i've never lost him what does it matter that my love couldn't keep him the night is full of stars and he'll never with me he no longer loves me,true but i love him still love is so short and oblivion so long although this may be the last pain he causes me and this maybe the last song i write for him -- JM1那年瘋狂愛上NERUDA O-LEVEL前夕收到男孩從遙遠國度寄來的信 anthropology的paper上寫了這首詩 很多種很簡單的心情 很多年之後我們再也回不去。 http://my2.hibiscusrealm.net/?u=hermoso -- -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 163.13.151.184 ※ 編輯: paphia 來自: 163.13.151.184 (11/19 09:25) ※ 編輯: paphia 來自: 163.13.151.184 (11/19 09:26)

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