[讀詩] 匕首 ◎鄭聿

看板poem作者 (逗點人)時間12年前 (2011/09/15 10:55), 編輯推噓32(3203)
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〈匕首〉 ◎鄭聿 ──序翰翰詩集《惡露》 也是利器的一種吧 無法形容完美的樣子 只知道會慢慢成形的 你的詩 裡面很短 而你收集那些短物 接起來 就成為長的 長且曲折 放入懷中 是一名愛刺客 想念之極致逼迫之極致 才能準確擊殺 另一個人── 終究是利器的一種啊 無法完美但是慢慢 琢磨了一生 把最利的部分 斷在他體內 讓自己鈍 -- http://commabooks.blogspot.com/ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 111.251.96.123

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喜歡他的詩:)
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