[必看] 耽美 人渣反派自救系統 by 墨香銅臭
文名:人渣反派自救系統
作者:墨香銅臭
網址:http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=2228486
正文完結日期:2015/7/9
提名原因: (內文須滿100字,否則不受理提名)
這次活動似乎不很熱絡,很多人氣高頗受好評的小說都沒人提名
可能是有愛的大大都寫過心得文懶另起爐灶XD
我只好來拋磚引玉一下
這部小說是作者第一部原創耽美長篇小說
主角穿越到一本種馬yy小說的人渣反派蒼穹山脈峰主沈清秋身上
沈清秋(受)是洛冰河(攻)的師尊,常常欺凌洛冰河
依那本書的情節,沈清秋之後會被洛冰河報復,死狀悽慘
沈清秋為了迴避掉死亡結局,所以對洛冰河很好,卻因此讓洛冰河愛上他了
前期最好笑的是因為這是一篇系統文
系統規定主角不能OOC,所以沈清秋即使想對洛冰河好
表面上也要裝成人渣反派的樣子,避免系統判他出局
因此常常表面冷靜、內心瘋狂吐槽
後期即使系統開放OOC了,主角的吐槽還是很好笑XDD
下面劇情洩漏較多,請注意
我覺得最精彩的一段是打敗洛冰河老爸那段,
洛冰河看起來已經收歸麾下,以為不會再背叛,
沒想到他其實一點安全感也沒有,隨時擔心師尊會離他而去。
這段讓這本更有深度。
第一次看的時候,有點可惜柳清歌沒跟沈清秋有些糾葛,
重看之後卻覺得這樣很好!
很喜歡這部所描寫的師兄弟情誼,蒼穹山脈同氣連枝極為護短
哪裡非要愛來愛去不可!
柳巨巨也是這一部的大人氣角色XD
原本應該酷炫狂霸跩的洛冰河,見了沈清秋就鼻涕眼淚直掉
連H的時候都哭得比沈清秋還慘,玻璃心一不小心就碎滿地
看他成天對師尊撒嬌裝可憐也頗為歡樂XD
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